This is just gorgeous! I got a shiver down my spine to hear Bran almost remember the ringing church bells and the sea rushing in. And Will listening, trying to hear something -- creepy, that. The fishermen's bones under the sea is such a clear, disturbing image. And I like the way that you can switch convincingly between that darker tone and the boys' lighthearted banter -- like where Will's ticking Bran off about erosion. Excellently done :)