ext_29234 ([identity profile] shrinetolust.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tadorna 2004-03-11 03:45 pm (UTC)

And this from the woman who wrote in my beta: "There’s something that doesn’t feel quite right about that – I think it’s because you’ve got someone feeling a colour, if you see what I mean"

I want a retraction. *G*

I loved this. I kept grinning maniacally throughout. I LOVE your Viggo...it's so on, coming up with these weird ideas that reveal themselves to be not quite so weird. I positively adored the whole moment with them lying on the floor, with their voices reverberating, and Viggo's hand on his chest making the tone and the color deeper...augh...*loves on you*

And I liked how Lij felt sort of continually shocked by the whole thing...that Vig and he didn't fit somehow, and there is such a contrast between them.

I know you're always worried about your smut, but it doesn't have to be wet and wild orgy to be sexy, and this was so very hot and delectable. I will just sit over here, feeling very turned on, and wait for my husband to get home. *G*

Sorry I'm late to the party on fb as always!! xxoo

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