posted by [identity profile] cassyl.livejournal.com at 02:01am on 22/01/2008
Great! Eerie, hallucinatory, wonderfully vivid imagery. The tone is just right, and so is the level of tension you maintain throughout. I love the Fleet, it's a great conceit. And the way it came together for me when Keith mentions an anchor was excellent. Well done.

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