Thanks for the comments!

is he rejector or rejected or something else altogether? I've read it twice now and still can't decide.

Interesting. Definitely rejected in the first part. In the second... maybe he does reject Dom, although in a much more subtle way. Not by saying 'I don't want you' but just by being closed off and turning in on himself. It's funny; when I'd written it I never saw it as the end of a relationship, but now when I look at it again, I can see how it can be read that way. Hmmm...

*muses*

Anyway thanks again, and glad you liked it. :)