posted by [identity profile] trianne.livejournal.com at 09:32am on 28/03/2003
Oh, you have a way with words missie. Gets it caught up in his tie and has to stop and detangle, white gloves flapping. He slimes their way like the snake he is, and Roxie's not in the mood for tossing dead mice.

Wonderful! and
First, the undressing. The unpeeling of stockings; those cobwebby nightmares that fall to hang limply over chair-backs, or nestle pointlessly on the floor. The unlacing of corsets - smooth cord swish-swishing through metal eyelets. - cobwebby nightmares - just beautiful imagery there.

I really liked this, much more than I liked Roxie in the film, I have to say. Great stuff :)

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