sheldrake

late again!

Just wanted to peek back and say I'm glad that my thoughts were good ones and that I was on target! heee..*dance of joy*

I really really did find it sexy, and sensual, and I'm glad I made sure to tell you. You're not as forward with your sex like us more in-your-face folks..hee..but it doesn't mean it's not as erotic..in fact the quieter, more subtle stuff can burn longer and brighter. ;P

I did feel the Viggo thing, definitely, and I thought you left enough of it in there. I think if you'd done more it would seem like you were trying to wave a red flag and force the reader to look at it...it's more fitting of this piece to just have it hanging there, in the background, making us go, "Hmm...what about?"

I of course wouldn't mind if you did more on these two/three, but I'm a sequel whore so you needn't listen to me. :P