lazulus: (cruel)
posted by [personal profile] lazulus at 04:14pm on 30/10/2003
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Too tired for coherence but, this is just...oh, I dunno...it's just...amazing, actually.

And that's pretty much all I can manage at this point!

But, the entire exchange between Dom and Elijah about souls just had me grinning like a maniac! Wonderful.

One small thing, this line: "Well -- yeah..." Dom drops his keys on the coffee table, and sinks heavily onto the couch next to Dom., I think you mean, next to Elijah.
 
posted by [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com at 04:43pm on 30/10/2003
Yeah, I love posting stuff unbeta'd, haha. Thanks for catching that, and thanks times a million for the feedback! Wheeeee! So pleased you liked it!

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