posted by [identity profile] marysiak.livejournal.com at 05:22am on 31/10/2003
I think I like best the lack of explanation and the way Dom just is different. The way you can feel how what has happened has changed him and it doesn't really matter how it happened or why although you do wonder a little when, how long has it been. The whole feel of the piece is great. You wind down with Dom as soon as you get into Elijah's presence.
 
posted by [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com at 08:31am on 31/10/2003
Thanks for this. It's really helpful, because it's so hard to judge, sometimes, how much information to leave out or put into a story.

Anyway, glad you liked it! :)

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